Mr Mascellani's Musings

Original

Ginger’s gaze rocks Mary Ann’s world
Like rough weather tosses a tiny ship,
Touch me, Gingerly, Ginger, she thinks.
Our love is such a faithful trip.
Make wild jungle cat love to me, Ginger.
Be as primitive as you can be, Ginger
I’ll be the Gilligan to your Skipper.
Caress my coconuts
and spank my bottom with your skipper’s cap.
Work me over with your fruity island tongue.
Let me be your “Lovie”
and make me thurstone HOOOOWWWWLLLLL
For the third time tonight.
Take my body
for another
three hour cruise.

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Ginger’s gaze rocks Mary Ann.
Like rough weather tosses a ship,
Touch me, Gingerly, Ginger, she thinks.
Make jungle cat love to me, Ginger.
Be as primitive as you can be, Ginger
I’ll be the Gilligan to your Skipper.
Caress my coconuts
and spank my bottom with your skipper’s cap.
Work me over with your fruity island tongue.
Let me be your “Lovie”
and make me thurstone HOOOOWWWWLLLLL
For the third time tonight.
Take my body
for another
three hour cruise.